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|english = But even still, I'd like for you to listen. I...as an artist, I'd like to hear your opinions, and how it makes you feel. |
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|english = Right now, I...we, are preparing for a very important event. |
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|english = If this doesn't go well, our dream may never come true. That's how important of an event it is for everyone's lives. |
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|english = ...For an event like that, everyone has entrusted the composing to me. |
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|english = So, no matter what, I have to make this song something exceptional. |
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|english = ——Please! Just one word is enough, so please give me your opinion! |
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|english = You've played it through the speakers in your room a number of times. ...Did you really think I wouldn't notice such an unfamiliar sound playing in my own home? |
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Latest revision as of 03:59, 6 July 2024
Chapter 3: Pride
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Toya's Room
Toya
(...I'd like to heat up the sound here.)
Toya
(I'd like people to feel a strong impact——like the emotionally moving nature of witnessing RAD WEEKEND for the first time.)
Toya
...Phew. My first song is somehow taking shape.
Toya
Alright. I'll play it from the top.
Toya
(...It's not bad. I think I was able to express the feelings I wanted to put into it, as well.)
Toya
(But...for some reason, I feel like it's lacking something.)
Toya
(Every one of the songs that were played at RAD WEEKEND lit a fire in our hearts.)
Toya
(Like a heat that erupts across your entire body...I, myself, experienced that feeling as well.)
Toya
(But the song I just wrote is still leagues away from that sensation.)
Toya
(It somehow seems too shallow...there's no rush of heat. It's become inoffensive.)
Toya
(In the past, when Souma-san was guiding me through track-making, and he taught me how to create a powerful sound——I thought I'd managed to grasp how to pour these important feelings into it...)
Toya
(...What should I do? There's the option of continuing to adjust this...)
Toya
...No, I'll start from scratch. I won't be able to surpass RAD WEEKEND with this song.
Toya
Once again, from the top.
One week later
Toya
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Toya
(...I've changed my approach since then, and composed a number of songs...)
Toya
(But all of them are lacking something. I don't feel the same heat I did from then.)
Toya
(...What could possibly be the cause of this?)
Toya
...Can I...really do this?
Toya
If this is how I'm faring with just the first song, then how will I be able to make all of——
Toya
...No. There's no point in wallowing in feelings like this.
Toya
Ken-san and the others all have high expectations of me. I have to make this, no matter what.
Toya's Father's Voice
——I'm home.
Toya
...! Dad...
Toya
(He's later than usual. ...Now that I think about it, he mentioned something about doing a concert at the hall next time.)
Toya
(Which means he must be busy with preparations. He said they would be playing a number of his compositions as well, so he must be arranging——)
Toya
...Ah.
Toya
(...I wonder how Dad would feel about this song.)
Toya
(Dad is a composer as well as a performer. Perhaps as a creator, he would be able to identify the problems with this song——)
Toya
(No...)
Toya
(It's likely he still doesn't think highly of our music. I'm not sure he would even bother listening...)
Toya
(And even then, if I were to ask myself if this was a song that was good enough to let Dad listen...)
Toya
(——No. I have nothing to lose.)
Toya
(I don't have time to be picky with my methods right now.)
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Toya
Dad. I apologize for bothering you as soon as you get home, but do you have a moment?
Toya's Father
...What is it? I have preparations to attend to in the morning, so make it quick.
Toya
I'd like you to listen to a song that I wrote.
Toya's Father
...A song that you wrote?
Toya
Yes. You see, right now, I'm writing songs for an event——
Toya's Father
I refuse.
Toya
...Kh.
Toya's Father
You decided you would go down a path different from my own. There's no point in asking for my opinion now.
Toya
...I thought you would say that.
Toya
But even still, I'd like for you to listen. I...as an artist, I'd like to hear your opinions, and how it makes you feel.
Toya's Father
...
Toya
Right now, I...we, are preparing for a very important event.
Toya
If this doesn't go well, our dream may never come true. That's how important of an event it is for everyone's lives.
Toya
...For an event like that, everyone has entrusted the composing to me.
Toya
So, no matter what, I have to make this song something exceptional.
Toya
——Please! Just one word is enough, so please give me your opinion!
Toya's Father
I've already listened to your song.
Toya
Eh?
Toya's Father
You've played it through the speakers in your room a number of times. ...Did you really think I wouldn't notice such an unfamiliar sound playing in my own home?
Toya
Ah... ...I'm sorry.
Toya
So, then...how was the song?
Toya's Father
...It is unworthy of evaluation.
Toya
Eh...
Toya's Father
I don't feel there's any pride in your song.
Toya
...Kh.
Toya's Father
That's all.
Toya
Ah...! Dad...!
Toya
Pride, huh...
Toya
(That's right. It must have seemed like I was lacking in pride to go so far as to ask him for guidance, even though we'd already parted ways once.)
Toya
(It could be that...my inability to have confidence in my own music was made apparent in the songs themselves.)
Toya
(No, there's no time to be despondent.)
Toya
(There must be something I can do to produce that kind of heat...I'll start again, from the beginning.)